Kindness: 1.5 out of 1.5 Rudeness: 0 out of 1.25 Humanity: 2.25 out of 2.25 Funniness: 0 out of 0.25 Suspicious-ness: -0.5 out of 0.6 Weirdness: 0.25 out of 0.25 Eli friendship: 0.25 out of 0.25
I would love to have more cute lessons with the kid. I honestly imagine having the social skills of a child pretending to be an adult to be kinda fun or funny at times as an option.
I'm a big fan of "non-humans in regular environments", so I'm definitely hooked on the idea of an eldritch entity adopting a girl. Or, in this case, a girl adopting an eldritch entity as her parent. LOL.
Although short, I'm already intrigued by what's happening and how things could go. No pressure to continue the story, of course, but thought I'd add my coin to the well. Hahaha.
THIS IS EVERYTHING I'VE EVER WANTED I NEED MORE!!! The only thing I can think to suggest at this juncture is maybe a couple more customization options, maybe some less-than-natural ones (unnatural eye or hair colors) that may or may not impact suspicion!
Interesting story concept. So far I've enjoyed the interactions between the current characters however I did notice a problem with the name bars. For some reason (and I don't know if it only happened to me) I can't seem to write anything at all. Almost like my keyboard can't connect or something along those lines. Either way, looking forward to further updates. :)
Did you make sure to click on the name space before typing? If you did, then I'm not sure how to recreate the issue since it works fine on all my computers. Thanks for the praise :)
I believe I clicked on the bar but I could be wrong. I'll have to check again. Thank you for the reply! (Edit: It worked now. It was indeed my computer working against me. xD)
Lol not trying to be dramatic but half the community play on their phones. No hate really. As somene that reads a fuck load of IFs I've just seen many polls taken on tumblr to that affect. Why most authors have a mobile mode as to note alienate those readers. And there are many of us. Unfortunately.
im afraid that I don’t know how to code it for mobile users, I have to use templates and while I did copy the code for mobile formatting it doesn’t work anyways, so there’s not much I can do.
It's fine. I've seen what that coding looks like from friends who are writers and i don't envy any of you. That shit is insane. I was just stating facts incase you weren't aware. But i did enjoy your demo very much. It was a fun read!
You're unfortunately gonna have to switch to desktop mode on your browser friend. Only way you'll be able to read it. It looks awkward as hell but what can you do! Sorry! Hope that helps!! 😇
ah shit, that’s not supposed to happen! Barlow is meant to be Eli’s last name, I must’ve mixed up introductions. Also I know the theme is messed up, and I haven’t known how to fix it, but I’ll try harder!
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It was interesting to play this game. I hope there will be new updates (if not it's okay, I enjoyed the story anyway)
I had fun pulling the strings ;)
I hope to see more of this
(Minute spoilers, Here's my stats)
Kindness: 1.5 out of 1.5
Rudeness: 0 out of 1.25
Humanity: 2.25 out of 2.25
Funniness: 0 out of 0.25
Suspicious-ness: -0.5 out of 0.6
Weirdness: 0.25 out of 0.25
Eli friendship: 0.25 out of 0.25
MORE plez.
This game is so good, I actually didn't expect to like it so much tbh.
I love this game, this is a really good concept :)
i love it so far someone let me know when it updates
I love the game so far, the idea is a great one and I hope it continues to be updated, as I'd like to see where it ends up.
I really enjoyed this game, I hope you add to it.
I would love to have more cute lessons with the kid. I honestly imagine having the social skills of a child pretending to be an adult to be kinda fun or funny at times as an option.
This is such an interisting premise, I'm truly excited to see how this game will go.
i was craving for some IF that we can be parents of a lost kid, and the concept of being a GOD!!!!!! Omg i just love it!
the concept is so good... I crave more. I do really hope you make this into a full fledged game.
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE ITTTT EEEEEKKKKKK >.<
Yaaaas omfg! This, like, bring such joy ngl! I love IFs where we can play as a parental figure!
I'm a big fan of "non-humans in regular environments", so I'm definitely hooked on the idea of an eldritch entity adopting a girl. Or, in this case, a girl adopting an eldritch entity as her parent. LOL.
Although short, I'm already intrigued by what's happening and how things could go. No pressure to continue the story, of course, but thought I'd add my coin to the well. Hahaha.
Lovely game. Definitely following it closely and hoping more people pick it up!
Omg it’s so much fun so far! If you ever continue writing it then that’ll be exciting!
This is amazing! I really hope you continue the story, if there is anyway we can support you in writing it let us know.
THIS IS EVERYTHING I'VE EVER WANTED I NEED MORE!!! The only thing I can think to suggest at this juncture is maybe a couple more customization options, maybe some less-than-natural ones (unnatural eye or hair colors) that may or may not impact suspicion!
I like it
Interesting story concept. So far I've enjoyed the interactions between the current characters however I did notice a problem with the name bars. For some reason (and I don't know if it only happened to me) I can't seem to write anything at all. Almost like my keyboard can't connect or something along those lines. Either way, looking forward to further updates. :)
Did you make sure to click on the name space before typing? If you did, then I'm not sure how to recreate the issue since it works fine on all my computers. Thanks for the praise :)
I believe I clicked on the bar but I could be wrong. I'll have to check again. Thank you for the reply! (Edit: It worked now. It was indeed my computer working against me. xD)
Glad it's working now! Sorry you had to deal with issues :(
Someone update me when this gets updated (:
This was fun. I hope to see it grow.
I can't play the game on phone it doesn't let me scroll down.
the game isn’t meant to be played on phone ^^
Lol not trying to be dramatic but half the community play on their phones. No hate really. As somene that reads a fuck load of IFs I've just seen many polls taken on tumblr to that affect. Why most authors have a mobile mode as to note alienate those readers. And there are many of us. Unfortunately.
im afraid that I don’t know how to code it for mobile users, I have to use templates and while I did copy the code for mobile formatting it doesn’t work anyways, so there’s not much I can do.
It's fine. I've seen what that coding looks like from friends who are writers and i don't envy any of you. That shit is insane. I was just stating facts incase you weren't aware. But i did enjoy your demo very much. It was a fun read!
I have done it... it's available for mobile users now.
You're unfortunately gonna have to switch to desktop mode on your browser friend. Only way you'll be able to read it. It looks awkward as hell but what can you do! Sorry! Hope that helps!! 😇
Thank you i didn't think of that at all 🙏😂
Overall nice start, will be waiting for more. Always liked the "what is this human mannerism" joke when dealing/ playing inhuman character.
Few thing i noticed tho.
Wrong/different surname from what i entered, same as the Charlies friend
save:https://pixeldrain.com/u/1Y1V2onA
Also you should probably edit the darkmode theme a bit
ah shit, that’s not supposed to happen! Barlow is meant to be Eli’s last name, I must’ve mixed up introductions. Also I know the theme is messed up, and I haven’t known how to fix it, but I’ll try harder!
If twine is anything like other html things, try checking css file, appearance related things are usually there.